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Help Me Write a Book
by Fae_Whisperer Sat 20 Feb 2021 - 9:23
Hey! So I’m in the midst of writing a story, it has three characters (and if any of you had read my threads you’ll know familiar names such as Arvaros, Ro and Daemon) I’ve already written a snippet for each of the trio and I’ve let two people read it for now. One suggests I start with Daemon’s story and I’ve always found the best plots to be here with you guys 
so if any of ya’ll are interested you can help me write (and I’ll give credit where it’s due!)
I’m open to multiple threads so I can get different plot lines to choose and pick from for each character I’m talking about. I have a lot written so far for each character and I’ll post them here in a spoiler. Tell me what you think! If you want details on where I see the plot going I’ll let you know also keep in mind each of the three have similar plots/stories going on right now, technically living in alternate universes but living the same day.
On activity I can’t guarantee anything as I’ve been slammed with work during the week and the weekends I spend most of my time with my boyfriend but sometimes he’s busy playing Escape from Tarkov or Call of Duty Modern Warfare. So obviously when he’s busy I’ll drop in and reply. I’ll definitely try to at least make one reply per day even if you yourself aren’t active that way the thread keeps alive per say.
In my next post in this thread I’ll drop each three plots in separate spoilers, but out of the three for now I’m going to focus on my character called Daemon (I pronounce it as day-mon)
so if any of ya’ll are interested you can help me write (and I’ll give credit where it’s due!) I’m open to multiple threads so I can get different plot lines to choose and pick from for each character I’m talking about. I have a lot written so far for each character and I’ll post them here in a spoiler. Tell me what you think! If you want details on where I see the plot going I’ll let you know
also keep in mind each of the three have similar plots/stories going on right now, technically living in alternate universes but living the same day. On activity I can’t guarantee anything as I’ve been slammed with work during the week and the weekends I spend most of my time with my boyfriend but sometimes he’s busy playing Escape from Tarkov or Call of Duty Modern Warfare. So obviously when he’s busy I’ll drop in and reply. I’ll definitely try to at least make one reply per day even if you yourself aren’t active that way the thread keeps alive per say.
In my next post in this thread I’ll drop each three plots in separate spoilers, but out of the three for now I’m going to focus on my character called Daemon (I pronounce it as day-mon)
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Re: Help Me Write a Book
by Fae_Whisperer Sat 20 Feb 2021 - 9:48
Another thing I should mention is that I’m all for adding characters to the story (either a female character I play or another male you play as I’ll be mostly male for each story) also when I translate what we have in a story obviously I’ll tweak your posts and my posts to make it flow better and if you’re curious I’ll dm you the story details!
I made these images through Artbreeder and their ethnicity is of Asian descent (I’m not sure which one to go rn but considering their prettiness I would have to say Korean) either way I’ll be dropping more on what their outfits would be like and also I don’t have to specifically focus on Daemon rn it’s just what my friend suggested if you like any at all dm me!
- Daemon’s POV:
- Waking up, it was like any other day. The sun was shining, neighbors bickering and birds doing… bird stuff. Yes. The ‘normal’ morning.
Shifting out of his bed, Daemon rubbed his eyes and looked around his room. There lay his electric guitar against the wall, propped up neatly with all of the other sound equipment he owned.
Next to it on his desk, he had an aquarium that housed one betta fish. The fish could only be described as punk rock looking. A black and white crowntail, the tail perfectly pointed while the face permanently looked on angrily. The betta was named Salem, for reasons that Daemon couldn’t own a cat- as it was, he was nearly obsessed with black cats, and being a huge fan of Sabrina the Teenage Witch… yeah, one could see where this led.
Getting up, Daemon walked sleepily over to the tank, and greeted Salem in a baby voice- the kind one would reserve for puppies or kittens.
“Hello my precious baby boy, how are you today?”
He always would do this in the mornings before he fed Salem. And each time, Salem wouldn’t answer, but that didn’t bother Daemon too much.
After letting Salem eat, Daemon also reached for the algae pellets. For you see, Salem had several tank mates, all of which were algae eaters, so Daemon made sure they wouldn't go hungry as well.
Once that was done, he shuffled to the bathroom to get on with his morning shower, and to eventually get ready for the day.
Daemon preferred his showers scalding hot - and always made sure to shampoo his charcoal black hair twice, and condition it once. Letting the conditioner soak into his roots, Daemon closed his eyes and attempted to just relax under the water.
The problem was, whenever he closed his eyes, Daemon would see flashbacks of a time that was definitely not in the present year. He wasn’t even sure that those flashbacks belonged in his memory.
They couldn’t have. They shouldn’t be his memories.
In the memory, Daemon would see the following ---
He was on a battlefield, Grecian soldiers around him with the bloodshed of ancient Greek monsters before him. He knew he was yelling out orders, but they were incoherent to his ears. And upon seeing two other men that looked very similar to himself surely made even less sense than the battle scene before him.
- What Daemon Looks Like:
- Rosalind’s POV:
- Waking up, it was like any other day. The sun was shining, the sky was clear and the trees on the street had a breeze gently blow through their leaves. Yes. The beautiful morning.
Laying there in his bed, Rosalind rubbed his eyes and looked up at his ceiling. There hung several plants all neatly placed in their terrariums and pots above his head and others hung all around his flat.
Shifting up from his bed, he glanced around his room. Everything one could see conveyed the idea of a greenhouse. Various plants from one size to the other rested on messy bookshelves filled with books titled such as ‘The Magic We Find in Nature’. Next to it on his desk, he had smaller plants, mostly succulents, placed in cute little pots either themed with animals or marble print. Getting up, Ro walked sleepily over to each individual plant in his flat, and greeted them in a soft sweet tone.
“Good morning,” his voice flowed as he inspected the leaves and dusted them off as needed, “Did you sleep well? I did. Today’s a new day, let’s make the most out of it.”
He always would do this in the mornings before he watered his plants. And each time, they wouldn’t answer, but that didn’t bother Ro too much because he already could sense what the plants were saying back to him.
After watering the plants, Ro would then go and reach for the book he had been reading. For you see, Ro would sit and read to his plants, all of which were very good listeners. He made sure they wouldn't go without knowing about the magic they held within them.
Once a chapter was finished, he laid the book back on the bookshelf and shuffled to the bathroom to get on with his morning shower, and to eventually get ready for the day. Even in his bathroom there were plants strewn about, they especially liked it there due to the humidity from his showers, along with a perfectly placed skylight that illuminated the bathroom in the day.
Ro preferred his showers very warm, but not too hot - and always made sure to shampoo his bubblegum pink hair twice, and condition it once. Letting the conditioner soak into his roots, Ro closed his eyes and attempted to just relax under the water.
The problem was, whenever he closed his eyes, he would see flashbacks of a time that was definitely not in the present year. He wasn’t even sure that those flashbacks belonged in his memory.
They couldn’t have. They shouldn’t be his memories.
In the memory, Ro would see the following ---
He was on a battlefield, Grecian soldiers around him with the bloodshed of ancient Greek monsters before him. He knew someone was yelling out orders, but they were incoherent to his ears. And upon seeing two other men that looked very similar to himself surely made even less sense than the battle scene before him.
- What Ro Looks Like:
- Arvaros’ POV:
- It was like any other day. The clouds covered the sky, and the endless drone of the city could be clearly heard from outside. Yes. The annoying morning.
Slowly sipping on his cup of coffee, Arvaros rubbed his eyes and looked around his room. There was hardly anything to be described about his room or his flat for that matter, as it was neat and tidy, not even a trace of dust was found on the shelves at all. The only item of significance worth noting was an electric bass that hung on its stand, sitting in a corner. The bass hadn’t been touched in a while, but it had been loved before, clearly shown from the tiny scars all over on Arvaros’ fingers.
Next to the bass on his desk, he had neat stacks of textbooks and an open notebook filled with notes from his college lectures. Like his flat, his notes were perfectly neat and organized. Arvaros always made sure his handwriting was uniform and concise, so that if he read it again the next day, he wouldn’t have to decipher his notes. Still half awake, Arvaros walked over to his desk and pulled out the chair to sit. Placing his cup of coffee down, he picked up a pen and began to review his notes as he had an exam later that week. He always would do this in the mornings after he grabbed coffee. And each time, the morning was always the same, but he was used to the same repeating feeling.
Once Arvaros was done reviewing his notes, he slid the chair back and after standing fixed the chair so it seemed like no one had been sitting there at the desk. The only sign of living in this room was the half empty cup of coffee still sitting there next to his notes. Turning away from the desk, he then shuffled to the bathroom to get on with his morning shower, and to eventually get ready for the day.
Arvaros preferred his showers cool, but never freezing - and always made sure to shampoo his natural platinum blond hair twice, and condition it once. Letting the conditioner soak into his roots, he closed his eyes and relaxed under the water.
Except this time, something different happened. The usual black void he would see as he closed his eyes changed. Arvaros began to see memories of a time that was definitely not in the present year. He wasn’t even sure that those flashbacks belonged in his memory.
They couldn’t have. They shouldn’t be his memories.
In the memory, Arvaros would see the following ---
He was on a battlefield, Grecian soldiers around him with the bloodshed of ancient Greek monsters before him. He knew someone was yelling out orders, but they were incoherent to his ears. And upon seeing two other men that looked very similar to himself surely made even less sense than the battle scene before him.
- What Arvaros Looks Like:
I made these images through Artbreeder and their ethnicity is of Asian descent (I’m not sure which one to go rn but considering their prettiness I would have to say Korean) either way I’ll be dropping more on what their outfits would be like and also I don’t have to specifically focus on Daemon rn it’s just what my friend suggested
if you like any at all dm me!
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Re: Help Me Write a Book
by Fae_Whisperer Sat 20 Feb 2021 - 10:33
And finally here’s some pics of each brothers ‘aesthetic’
- Daemon’s:
- Ro’s:
- Arvaros’:
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Re: Help Me Write a Book
by Knight_of_none Sat 20 Feb 2021 - 12:18
XD The fish threw me off.
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